Florida Poetry Group Exercise
| Group 1: Brock, "Christ in the Sun" Group 2: Sapia, "South Beach: Proteus, S-Shaped in Sand" Group 3: Bishop, "Seascape" Group 4: Philp, "Heirlooms" Group 5: Bottoms, "Under the Vulture Tree" |
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1. Have at least two members of your group read the poem aloud.
2. Look up any words you are not familiar with.
3. Paraphrase the poem,
4. Is the poem in open or closed form? If closed, what pattern is the poet using? If open, why did the poet choose to break the lines and stanzas as s/he did? How does the form of the poem complement the author's purpose?
5. Who speaks in the poem? What kind of speech act does the speaker perform?
6. What kind of imagery is used in the poem? To what effect?
7. Find some effective figures of speech (metaphors, similes, personification, etc.). How do they enhance the meaning of the poem?
8. Are there any allusions (references to outside elements -- Biblical, mythic, literary, historical) in the poem? Why does the poet use the allusion(s)?
9. What kind of sound effects are used in the poem (rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, assonance, onomotopoeia)? What effect do they have on the poem?
10. How does the poem speak to you?
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South
Beach: Proteus, S-Shaped in the Sand
His
groggy subconscious wearily he dreams
of round stones and broken pottery as
shameless cries of Cubans heavy listening
to the sirens, to the history Yvonne Sapia (1983)
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Heirlooms Through the garbled signals
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We have all seen them circling pastures, and I cut the engine, let the river grab the jon boat And I drifted away from them, slow, on the pull of the
river, David Bottoms (1987)
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Seascape This celestial seascape, with white herons
got up as angels, flying as high as they want and as far as
they want sidewise in tiers and tiers of immaculate
reflections; the whole region, from the highest
heron down to the weightless mangrove
island with bright green leaves edged neatly with
bird-droppings like illumination in silver, and down to the suggestively Gothic arches
of the mangrove roots and the beautiful pea‑green
back‑pasture where occasionally a fish jumps, like a
wild‑flower in an ornamental spray of spray; this cartoon by Raphael for a tapestry for
a Pope: it does look like heaven. But a skeletal lighthouse standing
there in black and white clerical dress, who lives on his nerves, thinks he knows
better. He thinks that hell rages below his iron
feet, that that is why the shallow water is so
warm, and he knows that heaven is not like
this. Heaven is not like flying or
swimming, but has something to do with blackness and
a strong glare and when it gets dark he will remember
something strongly worded to say on the
subject. Elizabeth Bishop
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Christ
in the Sun
The
primitive men we find here are, to us, new men, But I
will preach them Christ! Christ! Christ!
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"O
Father, take this darkness from my blood Yet it is
like Eden, this place, with its warm sun, Here,
where the one road is the sun's road, Van K. Brock (1979)
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